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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Wed Jan 28, 2015 12:40 pm

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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:39 am

Red hot Chilli peppers - Dosed with a friend

https://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/dosed-cover-rhcp
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Post  The Great Heroins on Fri Feb 13, 2015 10:27 am

Nice
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Thu Feb 26, 2015 4:00 am

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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:28 pm

XD - Sam Smith I know i'm not the only one, that baritoneee mmmm

http://picosong.com/Vigk/
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New EP

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Wed Jun 03, 2015 11:58 am

Hi guys, me a two friend have made this quick EP, we have never played together but somehow managed to make these songs.
I hope you like it Razz

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Solitary Man - Neil Diamond

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sat Aug 22, 2015 10:08 pm

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Original song - The Harder Will Be The Fall

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sat Sep 05, 2015 8:47 pm



hi guys, this is a new song, it needs some adjustments so the vocals fit better with the rest of instruments so you have to bring the volume up so it doesn't sound karaokeish, appreciate critics on my singing Razz
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Tue Sep 08, 2015 9:18 am

a new song guys:



Very Happy
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  Princesszolli Demi on Tue Sep 08, 2015 10:48 am

South Korean Guru Monk wrote:a new song guys:



Very Happy
Your vocal tone sounds good, but you suffer from Andy Biersack syndrome, where you can't seem to make it into the upper 4th octave lol. That's not a bad thing though, so otherwise this is pretty cool.
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Wed Sep 09, 2015 4:56 am

Yeah man it is weird there are days where I sound really femenine and others where I cant get f4 properly done.
Thank you for your thoughts.
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  Pepe Forever on Wed Sep 09, 2015 2:13 pm

Good stuff by you overall. The instrumentation is pretty well produced for a demo, I like the song Punto de Vista. Your tone and pitch sounds quite good, the studio quality really brings the best of it. But, honest constructive critique: your diction is quite shaky, I can barely make out what you're saying and you're singing in my natural language Razz

The Strokes cover really sounds good too. Really digging the part when you go a little higher and add some "soul" to the melody (i.e. 1:25). Love the guitar. The issue with the diction "though a little less" is still there, though you fixed it near the end.

Keep delivering the good stuff!
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Fri Sep 11, 2015 12:55 am

thanks pepe, the big sound is because of a package of wave plugins (for cubase) i managed to pirate xd it is a big jump of quality for sure. i didn't processed quite well the bass in the first one / did things too quickly and sounded a bit low overall but anyway.
i also noticed the shaky pronuntiation but i dunno, i like how it sounds, more like a dying cat or something xd i'll have your critic in mind tho for the next time.
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  Princesszolli Demi on Fri Sep 11, 2015 1:00 am

South Korean Guru Monk wrote:Yeah man it is weird there are days where I sound really femenine and others where I cant get f4 properly done.
Thank you for your thoughts.
Cheers
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Donuts Thread (The one one from now on)

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Thu Mar 03, 2016 4:28 am

https://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/soplo-de-sueno-demo-falso-guru

Have to fix some things in the vocals and specially the middle part of the song.

lyrics:

(spanish)

la noche se vuelve larga con cada palabra
así que únete a esta fiesta de temores con valor
desatado entre acuarelas, resonando entre mis cuerdas
estas manos ya cansadas que te esperan por amor

regresando a la batalla soy el chico sin su almohada
nadie sabe donde estaba mientras miran mis ojos
reflejando tu mirada sigo el ciclo del terror
una serpiente asustada por la cola del dragón

dame un soplo de sueño y mis ojos se irán
hacia el mar
dale vida al tormento
guardaré para ti esta parte de mi
que se olvida de todo y te sigue hasta el fin

amanecerá, alada junto a mi
no será esta vez un maldito sueño
besaré su piel, sangre de su miel
una puesta de sol bajo sus cabellos

dame un soplo de sueño y mis ojos se irán
hacia el mar
dale vida al tormento
guardaré para ti esta parte de mi
que se olvida de todo y te sigue hasta el fin

veo el tiempo fluir, corre lento
quiero ser de piedra pero aveces quiebro
quiero estar contigo pero aveces miento
quiero ver tus ojos y volver al cielo

(english)


Night becomes longer with each word
So join this fear~themed party with courage
Unleashed in watercolours, ringing from my chords
In this tired hands waiting because of love

Coming back to the battle, I am the guy without his pilow
Nobody knows where I was when they look into my eyes
Reflecting your stare, I follow the cycle of terror
A frightened snake by the tail of the dragon

Give me a breath of dreams and my eyes will go
Into the sea
Give birth to torment / where torment dies
I'll keep for you this part of me
That forgets about everything and follows you to the end

It will be a sunrise, her wings next to me
This time it won't be a dam dream
I will kiss her skin, blood from her honey
A sunset under her hairs

Give me a breath of dreams and my eyes will go
Into the sea
Give birth to torment / where torment dies
I'll keep for you this part of me
That forgets about everything and follows you to the end

I see the flow of time, it runs slowly
I want to be made of stone but sometimes I crumble
I want to be with you but sometimes I lie
I want to you see your eyes and come back to heaven
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  imdevine on Thu Mar 03, 2016 4:46 am

I somehow like this song, and generally I like spanish, it's very musical.

Regarding your singing, I think you know what you should work on.
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Thu Mar 03, 2016 2:58 pm

Thanks for the reply but I would like to read impressions on my voice, good and bad
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Post  Aníbal on Thu Mar 03, 2016 3:10 pm

Chamo! necesitas mejorar tu pronunciación en español, sobre todo en las vocales A E O y en las "LL" de batalla
y un poco más de emoción en los coros
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  Rebsedd on Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:18 am

Cuando haces una especie de curva en las notas gtaves se siente como que perdés la nocion de la nota que estas tratando de alcanzar y te hace desafinar un poco. La parte de las 2 voces es medio un quilombo también, practicalas más separadas y despues unilas.
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  CracK on Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:38 am

Tu madre puta
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Post  Rebsedd on Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:49 am

Crack2Hack wrote:Tu madre puta

not even that simple phrase right huh
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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  CracK on Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:57 am

blame google translate not me Dance
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I'm in love with the COCO cover - DonutsGalacticos

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Thu May 19, 2016 11:25 pm

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Re: Donuts Singing thread

Post  Princesszolli Demi on Fri May 20, 2016 12:04 am


best thing on here so far
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Post  Rebsedd on Fri May 20, 2016 3:19 am

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