Macaroni Ménage à trois - Benji

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Macaroni Ménage à trois - Benji

Post  Lurex on Mon Jun 23, 2014 7:44 am

that's not actually what it's called, but i'm writing a song about a threesome.  here's what i got, it's a rough demo

i hate the piano tone but w/e i'm stuck with it.  atm i think it sounds too dramatic, whereas my original concept was something light-hearted and silly fun (it is about nailing two chicks at once, after all).  hopefully i can come in with some fun percussion and mild brass to brighten it up.

this was also a bit of an experiment to see what range I should be writing songs for myself in; I wrote this one as the midrange song, and I wrote a higher and lower song as well at the same time.  this one was definitely most comfortable and i'm pleased that I was able to make full use of my headvoice and chest voice within one range, which means I have more dynamics to work with.

here's where it's at, very poorly mixed/mastered.

https://soundcloud.com/pissonmyface/lots-of-dicks-n-butts/s-05sTm
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Re: Macaroni Ménage à trois - Benji

Post  Aníbal on Wed Jun 25, 2014 4:54 am

Do you want to sound like Queen? haha

funny song man, but maybe you should try in a lower key to get a relaxed sound
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