Macaroni Ménage à trois - Benji

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Macaroni Ménage à trois - Benji

Post  Lurex on Thu Jun 19, 2014 7:44 am

that's not actually what it's called, but i'm writing a song about a threesome.  here's what i got, it's a rough demo.

i hate the piano tone but w/e i'm stuck with it.  atm i think it sounds too dramatic, whereas my original concept was something light-hearted and silly fun (it is about nailing two chicks at once, after all).  hopefully i can come in with some fun percussion and mild brass to brighten it up.

this was also a bit of an experiment to see what range I should be writing songs for myself in; I wrote this one as the midrange song, and I wrote a higher and lower song as well at the same time.  this one was definitely most comfortable and i'm pleased that I was able to make full use of my headvoice and chest voice within one range, which means I have more dynamics to work with.

here's where it's at, very poorly mixed/mastered.  

https://soundcloud.com/pissonmyface/lots-of-dicks-n-butts/s-05sTm
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Post  Lurex on Thu Jun 19, 2014 12:29 pm

boomp
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Post  geomusicmaker on Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:25 am

wow dude, you have an awesome voice!

First time hearing your stuff and I'm quite impressed.

Smooth tenor voice.
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Post  Lurex on Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:52 am

thanks! i don't share my originals much, and very few people on this forum have actually heard my voice - I was sad nobody ever gave me any critiques on this.
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Post  geomusicmaker on Wed Jul 09, 2014 10:57 am

I like the queenesque harmonies too
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Post  Lurex on Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:04 pm

Thanks that's my favorite part to write and record of every song
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Post  Aníbal on Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:17 pm

I though I gave you a critique about this one! but maybe I forgotted to click on "send"
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Post  boob on Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:36 pm

Wow, I'm jealous of your transition between head and chest. Nice job! It's beautiful.

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Post  Lurex on Wed Jul 09, 2014 11:06 pm

I forgive you, anibal :p

thanks titties, I'm really trying to develop that technique into my own style cause it's always come naturally to me. that's all I've got going for me hahaha.
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