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Before The Sand - Original

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Fri Apr 25, 2014 11:24 am

another oldie remixed and kinda mastered, i've got to fix something the middle part tho and maybe re record vocals...

http://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/before-the-sand-mix-2

lyrics:

Before The Sand

i'm looking for something special
to fill up this empty and broken bottle
a breath of faith in these long gone nights
before the stars pass away
before they break into storm
before we all turn to dust and the sand
burn my eyes

and i'm walking to nowhere
those clues let me know
that this world is a place
and i'm born to obey
i'm a fool between giants
a fist full of liars
i'm broken and fixing the system
they made

i'm proud of the doubt that i have inside
the clues are lying outside right there
it won't take much time for them to come
before we all start to run
before we all forget our sons
before the night break into storm
and the sand burn my eyes

and i'm walking to nowhere
those clues let me know
that this world is a place
and i'm born to obey
i'm a fool between giants
a fist full of liars
i'm broken and fixing the system
they made

stop the time and take someone to ride above the sun
stop this lie you'll never know
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Re: Before The Sand - Original

Post  Broses on Sun Apr 27, 2014 6:31 am

It sounds like a nice song, for what it's worth. Gives off a very crunchy stoner rockish/metal System Of A Down vibe in general to me, especially when you transition into that chilled dreamy aquatic guitar tone..

The watery guitar interlude takes me to a deserted desert highway on the edges of civilization, with a beautiful yet lonely and sunset soon to be gradually blanketed by an endless sea of stars. The heavier majority-length of the song is just the soundtrack to the sun's set.

Would love to hear it given update treatment, especially if you feel your vocals have improved (or you'd put them closer to the forefront of the mix, I dig the organic sound though)

Dawn is purty, too. :)Nice little ditty you've got there.

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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:58 am

yeah i thought of re-recording vocals as the performance is pretty meh, thanks for the feedback.  Handshake 
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Re: Before The Sand - Original

Post  Broses on Sun Apr 27, 2014 2:22 pm

DonutsGalacticos wrote:yeah i thought of re-recording vocals as the performance is pretty meh, thanks for the feedback.  Handshake 

Let me know if you do re-record it, I'm curious, and I'll check here anyway.

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