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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sat Apr 05, 2014 11:06 pm

well this is an relatively old song of mine, i didn't really liked it's lyrics and melodies so i decided to try to remake them, i think these are better, it's not finished yet, it's just a demo until i can record vocals properly.
Also there are some lines that may be changed.

https://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/girls-advice

i found my way
you left your chance
all the birds were falling into the ocean

but it came to life
to the core of emotion
lighting pumping with fire
to the river inside me

this wakes up the question again
a cold wind pushes your hands down

and then it came to life
with breathtaking blind will
blasting inside my mind
against our fears she stands tall

she found her way
you lost her trace
trading shame for hopeless feelings paint in grey

then it came to life
to the core of the emotion
sickness drowns out the life
heaven waits for a sign

this wakes up the question again
a strange wind pushes your hands down

and then it came to life
with breathtaking blind will
blasting inside my mind
against our fears she stands tall


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Post  R.I.P. Rapport Rapturer on Sun Apr 06, 2014 12:56 am

Great lyrics, I'm impressed. I can't listen to the song at the moment, but your originals have been good so far, hence why I'm expecting something great.
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Apr 06, 2014 7:36 am

thanks for the feedback man, lyrics/melodies are always the hardest part.
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:59 am

oh fuck yeah, i tried to remixed it and add a much more dirty distortion to the bass, also added an outro riffage cause i was tired of the main riff i think it melts the shit out. Hard song to mix btw.

updated:

https://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/girls-advice
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