Him - Gone With The Sin

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Him - Gone With The Sin

Post  Guest on Wed Mar 05, 2014 1:54 am

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Re: Him - Gone With The Sin

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Wed Mar 05, 2014 2:30 am

The first verse sounds pretty weird really unconfortable and like you were sleeping and dreaming while singing or something, the chorus is better but the lower notes are pretty weak/fry, maybe try highering the key of the song.
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Re: Him - Gone With The Sin

Post  Guest on Wed Mar 05, 2014 2:45 am

DonutsGalacticos wrote:The first verse sounds pretty weird really unconfortable and like you were sleeping and dreaming while singing or something, the chorus is better but the lower notes are pretty weak/fry, maybe try highering the key of the song.

The lower chorus notes are not fry, and felt very comfortable to me... Maybe it's because I sang in a relaxed way. As for the 'sleepy' beginning, was just trying to follow his orignal 'spoken' way.
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