Ode To Solitude Final Part - HIM

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Ode To Solitude Final Part - HIM

Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:40 pm

what do yo think?

http://picosong.com/YTTj/
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Post  Guest on Sun Feb 23, 2014 9:56 pm

Vocals:A few times you were slightly off beat, and the phrasing was weird in a few spots. You also need a bit more control over your tone because it gets a bit cloudy, especially when the guitar is playing at the same time.

Otherwise, great song! Clean it up a bit and It'll be AWESOME!!!
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:00 pm

ryugen wrote:Vocals:A few times you were slightly off beat, and the phrasing was weird in a few spots. You also need a bit more control over your tone because it gets a bit cloudy, especially when the guitar is playing at the same time.

Otherwise, great song! Clean it up a bit and It'll be AWESOME!!!

this is a cover not my song! xD
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Post  Guest on Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:02 pm

Lol... Then just pretend I said cover instead of song. It's 6 am here...
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Feb 23, 2014 10:07 pm

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Post  Pepe Forever on Sat Mar 08, 2014 8:42 pm

How about try singing something that suits your range better, maybe?

The high notes are the beggining were decent, but the oddly doubletracked clipped sound doesn't really help. On the final F5 if you just couldn't singing you could've tried going for a lower more suitable note and just belt the shit out of it.
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