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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sat Jan 25, 2014 11:39 am

a new one, with vocal and everything

http://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/chaotic-minds-expression


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Post  Guest on Sat Jan 25, 2014 2:17 pm

You sound like Muse haha but in the good way, i think the voice is too low for the music, it's a nice song
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sat Jan 25, 2014 10:55 pm

it's just a demo far for being a song, and voice is just recorded as a reference it's not supposed to be sung like that
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Post  Guest on Sun Jan 26, 2014 3:01 am

DonutsGalacticos wrote:it's just a demo far for being a song, and voice is just recorded as a reference it's not supposed to be sung like that

then, it's a nice demo far from being a song haha
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Jan 26, 2014 10:50 am

Allright, the instrumental is finished, tomorrow i'll do the vocals, pure rawness!!!!  Hug 

http://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/chaotic-minds-expression

btw i dunno if the title is gramatically correct
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Thu Jan 30, 2014 9:15 am

LYRICSSS!! i decided to change my past lyrics, these are way better at least the melody

Chaotic Mind Expression

now is the time
as the world falls asleep
tell me you're here with me
in the darkness where i live

insect of me, write some stupid poem
inspire me, like the good old lovers
and i
will stand in front of anyone who wants to hurt you
i'll sing your song alone with the weight of my mind

use all your time
will i hold on to see
how my mind falls apart
and the moon shines this night on my

monster of my dreams, i'm shaking of fear
dance and come with me, like the good old lovers
and i
will stand in front of anyone who wants to hurt you
i'll sing your song alone with your weight of my mind

this lazy mind won't be shelter
i just hated to feel my heart
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Post  Guest on Wed Feb 05, 2014 5:55 am

There are a few moments where your vocals really clash with the guitar. There are plenty of ways to deal with this though.
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Wed Feb 05, 2014 7:12 am

yeah i know, i just wanted to keep like a cheap saving time demo, vocals are pretty bad at this take i could do better still recording is the most tedious thing ever, specially if you have to build the song as you record it as i usually just have some riffs.
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sat Mar 15, 2014 10:53 pm

i recorded this 2nd take on vocals, standing a little further from the mic, does it sound better to you?

https://soundcloud.com/atrasalviejo56/cme-vocals-take-2
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Post  Lurex on Sat Mar 15, 2014 11:36 pm

WHY DONT THE LYRICS RHYME WHAT ARE YOU SOME KIND OF DR SEUSS HATING BITCH good song tho
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Post  DonutsGalacticos on Sun Mar 16, 2014 12:16 am

thanks idunno i think they ryhtm in some weird way, with the melody or something.
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